08-09-2005, 03:33 PM
Ok her goes!
once upon a time
There was a warrior in search of fame and glory.
He traveled from towns to villages, picking the biggest guy and taking him down, after a year or so of doing this his name was as common as a kings.
the next town he came to was a simple one the people where out doing there chores, kids chasing each other. one of the kids ran right into him as he was scoping for his mark. he looked down at the kid, the kid looked scared as if he saw a wolf. he watched the kid take off running and hid inside a house. a few seconds later a man came out of the house to comfront the hero.
"You've got a bounty on your head Ludvig" The man pointed to a piece of parchment attached to a his house.
"5000 gold to the capture of Ludvig von Troy. 3000 gold for his head!" the parchment read.
the man pointed again at a Soldier posting the parchment up on the other buildings. "He's also taking our gold for taxes!" he explained.
Ludvig marched over to the soldier then tapped on his shoulder. the soldier turned quickly then gasped, glancing at the him then at the parchment then back at him.
"If you can beat me in a duel ill let you take me back to your king, but if i win you give the taxes back to the people!" Ludvig commanded. the soldier gave a willing smile.
"Alright you've got a duel" the soldier walked out into a open spot then drew his weapon. the people gather from there houses and chores to watch the event.
they all shouted his name boosting his morale and lowering his opponents. the soldier swung first, Ludvig parried knocking the soldier off balance. he quickly countered Ludvigs blow and swung again, this time scratching Ludvigs leg. Blood rolled down his leg as he limped ans circled the soldier. time seemed to stand still as they attacked and recoiled to attack again.
after some time if dancing, Ludvig spun his sword sideways and hit the soldier in teh back of the head with the flat of his sword.
the soldier let a grunt as he fell to his knees. Ludvig kicked him knocking him backwards, as he laid on his back Ludvig pointed his sword at his throught then cut his fat satchel from his belt.
"Tell your king im coming for him next." Ludvig kicked the satchel over to the farmer
To be continued
once upon a time

There was a warrior in search of fame and glory.
He traveled from towns to villages, picking the biggest guy and taking him down, after a year or so of doing this his name was as common as a kings.
the next town he came to was a simple one the people where out doing there chores, kids chasing each other. one of the kids ran right into him as he was scoping for his mark. he looked down at the kid, the kid looked scared as if he saw a wolf. he watched the kid take off running and hid inside a house. a few seconds later a man came out of the house to comfront the hero.
"You've got a bounty on your head Ludvig" The man pointed to a piece of parchment attached to a his house.
"5000 gold to the capture of Ludvig von Troy. 3000 gold for his head!" the parchment read.
the man pointed again at a Soldier posting the parchment up on the other buildings. "He's also taking our gold for taxes!" he explained.
Ludvig marched over to the soldier then tapped on his shoulder. the soldier turned quickly then gasped, glancing at the him then at the parchment then back at him.
"If you can beat me in a duel ill let you take me back to your king, but if i win you give the taxes back to the people!" Ludvig commanded. the soldier gave a willing smile.
"Alright you've got a duel" the soldier walked out into a open spot then drew his weapon. the people gather from there houses and chores to watch the event.
they all shouted his name boosting his morale and lowering his opponents. the soldier swung first, Ludvig parried knocking the soldier off balance. he quickly countered Ludvigs blow and swung again, this time scratching Ludvigs leg. Blood rolled down his leg as he limped ans circled the soldier. time seemed to stand still as they attacked and recoiled to attack again.
after some time if dancing, Ludvig spun his sword sideways and hit the soldier in teh back of the head with the flat of his sword.
the soldier let a grunt as he fell to his knees. Ludvig kicked him knocking him backwards, as he laid on his back Ludvig pointed his sword at his throught then cut his fat satchel from his belt.
"Tell your king im coming for him next." Ludvig kicked the satchel over to the farmer
To be continued
